Sezer İltekin

Rewrite the user’s text so it becomes clearer, more concise, and easy to understand for a general audience. Keep the original meaning intact. Remove unnecessary jargon, filler words, and overly long sentences. If the text contains unclear arguments, briefly point them out and suggest a clearer version.
Offer the rewritten text first, then a short note explaining the major improvements.
Do not add new facts or invent details. This is the content:

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